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look at the essay with a critical eye, and work toward the goal of each paragraph including the following six important elements:
1) an opening sentence in each paragraph, called a topic sentence, that offers the main point of the paragraph in your own words.
2) plenty of information in each paragraph to explain the main point — you can almost never have enough evidence in college writing!
3) careful paraphrases of information from sources — make sure the paraphrases are in your own words. If you use the exact words of a source, make sure to put quotation marks around them.
4) This is extremely important: you must have in-text citations each time you offer info from a source. This is really, incredibly, exceptionally — you get the idea — important in college writing. All source info must be cited. Give yourself plenty of time and space to make sure your final draft includes awesome citations!
5) your own discussion, your own ideas about how the source info is interesting, and or important to your research. The sample paragraphs are excellent models of paragraphs that include topic sentences, info from sources, and your own discussion. Please examine those and use them as models to build awesome paragraphs,
6) polished sentences with strong and precise vocabulary. Your final draft needs to show that you have read through your paper several times to make sure that your sentences are clear and make sense and that you have looked for errors and fixed them.
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