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Instructions: Read through your partner’s essay twice. The first time familiarize yourself with the subject of the essay. The second time, read for the essentials we discussed in class: the qualities of good writing. Mark the essay as you read and add questions or comments on the writing. Then, please answer the following questions as completely as possible. Do not just give the paper and writer the stamp of approval, or a “yes” or “no” answer – you will be doing your partner a disservice.
THESIS STATEMENT: Is there a clear thesis on a current issue or topic? Is it specific, narrowed, focused? Is issue being analyzed clearly stated? Is the thesis one sentence and the LAST SENTENCE in the introduction? It doesn’t have to be here. . . but this technique is often used. Is the thesis stated elsewhere in the essay? Suggestions for improvement?
INTRO/CONCLUSION: Is the introduction effective and interesting? Does the author use a catchy introduction such as a case history or relevant statistics to catch the reader’s attention? Does the conclusion add a note of finality? Suggestions for improvement?
DEVELOPMENT: Does the body of the paper support thesis and stay on topic? Does it clearly and convincingly analyze illustrate and support it’s point? Is the paper developed enough? Are the examples reasonable and not too far-fetched? Are there relevant examples to the issue that the author has neglected? Is the paper at least two full pages long? Suggestions for improvement?
ORGANIZATION/COHERENCE: Does the paper “flow”? Are the ideas stated in logical order? Are the transitions between sentences and ideas effective and clear? Is the paper itself clear and understandable or confusing? Suggestions for improvement?
STYLE: What do you think of the style and tone of the paper? Is the tone balanced, unemotional, and unbiased? Is the word choice specific and interesting or dull and general?
MLA FORMAT: Is paper word-processed with correct font and margins and formatted MLA style with in-text citations, and references page?

IN-TEXT CITATIONS: Is all evidence that is not common knowledge cited correctly at the end of the sentence: parenthesis, author’s last name or shortened title, year, p. # if a quote, close parenthesis, period.
Does each in-text citation have a corresponding references page entry? NO web addresses in the in-text citations? Are quotes minimized?
Works Cited: Does the author have a references page at the end of his or her paper with all references listed in alphabetical order in correct MLA style?

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