My major point of feedback is to focus less on general comments about the importance of language and cultural education and to focus instead on your specific experiences and skills so that you can address how they have prepared you for this job. You can also discuss things like your plans for classes (see job ad), your opinion on how best to engage students in the classroom, etc. I understand that cover letters may differ quite a bit between China and the US, so my feedback is meant to help you be successful in securing a job in the US specifically.
2.5 / 3 Professionalism. You have clear writing, but we can work on making it more concise and organizing your ideas more. We can also take time to work on determining where sentences should start and end. Great job on paying attention to spelling and on using academic language.
.25 / 1 Introduction Please see the rubric for information that should be included. I wrote an example introduction paragraph in the UB Box document. Please feel free to use that verbatim.
2 / 7 Relevant experience / skills You shared a lot of information on your philosophy of teaching, but a cover letter needs to reference specific experiences that you have that make you a good teacher, researcher, etc. I know you may not yet have these skills, so that is a good motivation to start developing them. You can say, for example, “I plan to apply for a tutoring position at the University at Buffalo’s Academic Success Center. Through this job, I will learn how to identify students’ issues with language learning, and I will develop activities to that encourage them to communicate in Mandarin without fear of making mistakes.”
2 / 3 Research interests This is a good start, and I think your interest in Second Language Acquisition and Pedagogy is very interesting. See my comments in the UB Box document about ideas on how to tie this to sociolinguistics.
1 / 1 Closing You provided all of the relevant information here. Great job! I made edits within the UB Box document to improve the organization of this information.
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