Personal essay draft- need a rewrite and edit

I typed out my draft of an essay, needs to be double spaced and edited. I will copy and paste instructions below. will TIP BIG if finished prior to 10AM!!!

Essay 1 (Personal Essay)


The purpose of this introductory essay is two-fold: 1) It is a way for me to get to know you better and 2) It is a way for you self-analyze and write about yourself. The second point is by far the more important of the two as this is a skill that can help us in our writing and in our lives. Self-reflection is how we can, oftentimes, change things for ourselves. When we stop and reflect on choices (both positive and negative) we’ve made and what the consequences of those choices were, we can potentially see a way towards better outcomes in all facets of our lives. Likewise, we often have a hard time saying positive things about ourselves and this essay will also be a place for that.

You will construct an essay that focuses on introducing yourself—the person you are currently and how you got to this point—and will utilize elements of memoir (reference both Zinsser and Macdonald here) to discuss and analyze several moments in your life that have defined you. Your essay should be about a 60%-40% split between analysis and storytelling. In other words, you should be spending more time analyzing these moments than on the spending of talking about those moments. Obviously, you will need some space to discuss these memories (hence the 40%) so don’t feel too restricted as those numbers are simply an estimation.

Your essay will be comprised of 3 double-spaced, 12-point font pages with no title page necessary. Keep fonts simple and use either ‘Garamond’ (my favorite) or ‘Times New Roman,’ if you please. As always, we will have ample class time to work on your essay, but continued work on your own time will be a must. Keep me in the loop and please let me know if complications arise!

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